Dear CEO
In some of the kids Disney movies there is too much love in some of the kids movies. Put more fighting and more action in the movies. When there is love in the kids movies like make it a shorter bit of time of the love. Some examples are like Rapunzel when the part where that guy climbed the tower, Snow White with the prince and Frozen when that boy liked that girl and they were flirting when they were on the carriage.
By Isaac
Hi Isaac, I like how you used examples of love being used too much in Disney movies. What I suggest you do next time is research who the CEO of Disney is so you can use their name in the letter. Also make sure you double check you editing and make sure your writing makes sense. Remember, we want to make quality blog posts. This includes a statement about our learning and a question for the reader at the end.
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