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ReplyDeleteI can tell that the photos you have included are things you find important. Remember we want to make quality blog posts which includes and statement about our learning and a question at the end for the reader. For this post you statement could have been: "we are learning about sharing personal information, not private information". The question you could used at the end: "do you know the difference between personal and private information?"