Hi this is my work for Week 8 T4 i hope you like it and i have a question for my work if you want you can make a character for a video game on an app on google search tynker minecraft
Hello Isaac This is really good and I like how you made a zomdog and that Charmander you made and it looks really good and nice and what do you mean by you can't feel the fur
HI Issac I really liked your idea of a Zomdog and yoru workign out for the maths but maybe next time you should make yoru writing a bit more bigger so its more easier to read.
Kia ora Isaac, well done for completing this weeks LCS. On slide 6 for the table of unknown words, I think you could have deleted the rows you did not fill in and that way you could have made the font larger in the rows you did do.
You did a great job clearly showing your working out for the maths questions, however I think you should have tried a few more chilli 3 or a chilli 4 question as I know you are very capable at maths.
I thought your Zomdog for Minecraft looks pretty cool! You did a great job designing your character. I also like how you wrote your poem about your Zomdog, nice work!
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Hello Isaac This is really good and I like how you made a zomdog and that Charmander you made and it looks really good and nice and what do you mean by you can't feel the fur
ReplyDeleteHI Issac I really liked your idea of a Zomdog and yoru workign out for the maths but maybe next time you should make yoru writing a bit more bigger so its more easier to read.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Isaac, well done for completing this weeks LCS.
ReplyDeleteOn slide 6 for the table of unknown words, I think you could have deleted the rows you did not fill in and that way you could have made the font larger in the rows you did do.
You did a great job clearly showing your working out for the maths questions, however I think you should have tried a few more chilli 3 or a chilli 4 question as I know you are very capable at maths.
I thought your Zomdog for Minecraft looks pretty cool! You did a great job designing your character. I also like how you wrote your poem about your Zomdog, nice work!