I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde Slide show is really cool. I really like the picture you chose from the music video and it’s a really clever idea to link to the music video. Your the first person out of all the students I Papakura I’ve seen link to the video.
Make sure next week you attribute all your images for maximum points by writing where you found them. You can have a look at the pictures on the activities page for an example.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Isaac,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde Slide show is really cool. I really like the picture you chose from the music video and it’s a really clever idea to link to the music video. Your the first person out of all the students I Papakura I’ve seen link to the video.
Make sure next week you attribute all your images for maximum points by writing where you found them. You can have a look at the pictures on the activities page for an example.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel